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Indie Skreet



Joined: 26 Feb 2017
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Location: London

PostPosted: Mon Mar 06, 2017 10:33 pm    Post subject: STEPS  Reply with quote



Steps

Iím swinging on a jungle vine
and juicing white grapes as I whine
nipping a nipple
and slipping my tipple
into an angel on-line

Iím stirring a warmed whiskey short
whilst touring a pussy resort
Iím whipping my whip
and lipping a trip
whilst pawing the bitches Iíve caught

Iím stripping the skin from the bone
licking every erogenous zone
as I unzip my zipper
I thank Jack the Ripper
for setting the climatic tone

Iím tasting their sweat on my tongue
and the malt mixed with salt into one
I quiver and snigger
as Iím growing bigger
and the young, forever stay young

Iím cheering myself to the top
Whilst tying hot totties in knots
Iím fingering fluff
and I canít get enough
though my inner voice tells me to stop

I deflate in a mess on the floor
battered and shattered and raw
in sticky defeat
of lack of real meat
and devour my unsavoury score

I consider the steps of my lie
deep down in the depths of each high
where each foot-threads slower
and each stair-treads lower
where thereís never an answer to why

Indie Skreet - 03/02/2017
series 1 of 3


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Indie Skreet



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PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2017 9:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

mm, not sure how to reply to this one ... so I won't! lol
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Indie Skreet



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Gunnar, thanks for the read, and yes, that's what I was looking to do with this one. Actually, this is the least favourite of the 3 I have written, so will be interested to see what you think of the others.
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Indie Skreet



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 17, 2017 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol, not sure of that but thank you  Very Happy
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Flossyfigtree



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked  Very Happy
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Indie Skreet



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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2017 1:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

laughing all the way, Flossy! An experimental piece you understand  Smile
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Dawn Munro



Joined: 05 Mar 2017
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2017 8:25 am    Post subject: Hahahaha Reply with quote

Why am I laughing, you ask? (You didn't, but play along - LOL) 'Cuz now I know I CAN get away with posting the raunchy poem I planned for Brian - operative word here - "planned" - I wrote it some time ago for a contest. LOL.

I would comment on your fun herein, but after Eph's review, I'm not sure I should...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

All kidding aside, Indie - brilliant!!!
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Indie Skreet



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 7:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol, Dawn. Thanks for the read ... seems most stay away from this genre! Glad you liked this one, as such great fun to write  Very Happy
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tonywager



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2017 5:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Indie
Great writing,
It is certainly a good read
What an interesting life your character leads!
Bless you


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